Jump Start Your Next Novel.

 

If you're beginning a new story, you need to figure out three things at the start. 

First, where does your story start? 

It doesn’t start with the weather or a prologue, giving six to ten pages of back story. 

What is the inciting incident that starts your protagonist on his/her journey?

Was someone he/she loved killed? Is he/she out for revenge? 

Was something valuable stolen he/she must recover? 

Why is it his/her responsibility to reclaim it? 

What special skills (if any) does the protagonist have to help him/her complete their task? 

What kind of baggage is he/she carrying around? (Guilt over the death of someone?)

Maybe he/she made a fatal mistake that haunts him/her? 

It might be a lack of belief in himself/herself) 

This is an internal struggle that will make him/her hesitate at critical moments causing him/her and other problems throughout the story.

Second, It's important to figure out your ending. 

How does your protagonist complete his/her journey and how does he/she overcome the internal problem he/she faced at the beginning? 

What changes have occurred in your protagonist's character by the end of your story? He/she has to change.

Every journey has a beginning and an end.  You head for work. You begin at home and end at your place of employment. If you’re unemployed and heard for work you will wind up driving around with no destination.

It’s the same if you don't know the ending of your story. Your characters will wander around and around and never conclude.

What many authors do is write a rough draft of their ending. This gives you a mark to aim for. Remember, I said, a rough draft. I promise you will change it at least twice by the time you finish your novel. Having this target keeps helps you move forward.

In my five-book series, The MacKenna Saga, I planned to marry off my two principal characters, Kalen and Mayla by the first half of the first book. When I got to that point, I felt that didn't work, so I tried to use that scene at the end of book two. That was a no go. I realized the best place for this scene was at the end of book five. I wrote it and tweaked it over twenty times as things in the other stories developed. I kept writing because I was excited to get my characters to that last scene. It was fun to write and reread when I felt I was losing focus. Also, that final version in no way resembled my first draft.

Third: You need a hook. 

A hook is an opening line or chapter that pulls your readers into your story and keeps them turning the pages. 

In Sleep till Noon: A Novel by Max Shulman. The opening line is the first chapter, 

"Bang! Bang! Four shots ripped into my groin and I was off on the greatest adventure of my life!" 

Now that’s an opening line and an inciting incident all wrapped up in one. That would and did make readers continue to turn the page. 

I hope these three suggestions will help jump-start your next novel.

Richard R Draude 

Trump Is Derailing The Elite’s Gravy Train

Kurt Schlichter

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Posted: Nov 04, 2019 12:01 AM

Like the garbage French elite of long ago, our American garbage elite of today has learned nothing and forgotten nothing. For four years, it has been focused entirely on deep-sixing Donald Trump for his unforgivable crime of demanding that our ruling caste be held accountable for its legacy of failure. Instead of focusing on not being terrible at their job of running America’s institutions, our elitists have decided that the real problem is us Normals being angry about how they are terrible at their job of running America’s institutions. So, let’s imagine that they finally vanquish Trump, though every time they come up against him they end up dragging themselves home-like Ned Beatty after a particularly tough canoe trip.

What happens then?

What happens then is that it’s back to business as usual, and for decades, business as usual for our garbage elite has not merely been running our institutions badly but pillaging and looting our country for power, prestige, and cash.

The difference is that in the future they will be much more careful to ensure that no one who is not in on the scam will ever again come anywhere near the levers of power. You can already see it – the demands that we defer to the bureaucrats they own, the attacks on the idea of free expression, and the campaign to disarm us. Their objective is no more Trumps, just an endless line of progressive would-be Maduros with the march toward despair occasionally put on pause for a term by some Fredocon Republican who hates us Normals just as much as the Dems, but won’t admit it until after he’s out of office.



Our garbage elite talks a good game about its service and moral superiority, but if our betters were actually better than us, we would not be having this national conversation about how awful they are.

The fact is that what they want to do is go back to the way it was before Trump, back to 2015, aka the year 1 BT – Before Trump. Back then, progressive Democrats got their bizarre social pathologies normalized. Moderate Democrats got money, power and an open season on the local talent. Corporate types represented largely by squishy Republicans got globalism and the ability to ship our jobs out and import Third World serfs in. And the fake conservatives of Conservative, Inc., got to cash in without the necessity of actually conserving anything.

The only people that the old system didn’t work for were the American people.

It’s important to remember and to always remind yourself, that everything our elite says about its motives and morals is a lie and a scam. Take the whole #MeToo thing. This was supposed to be some sort of revolutionary rebellion against the sexual exploitation of the powerless by the powerful. It’s not, and never was. Rather, it’s simply an internal power struggle among and within the elites to reallocate power among snooty people who don’t give a damn about you or me. The fall of Harvey Weinstein or Matt Lauer or any of the other bigwigs means nothing to the conservative

single mom being exploited by the Democrat donors who own Walmart. It was actually striving female members of the elite – actresses, models, media figures, executives – leveraging the monstrosity of the creeps at the top to increase their own power within the elite. Do you see any of these #MeToo heroines, now that they have taken their scalps, helping their non-elite sisters out in Gun-Jesusland? Yeah, right. 

They are lining up with the rest of their elite pals to shaft us.

What you do see is excuses. They excuse Bill Clinton and his enabler Felonia Milhous von Pantsuit. 

They excuse Gropey Joe. They are in the process of excusing Katie Hill, whose naked hairbrush photo has ensured that none of us will ever sit on a hotel room chair again. Why no outrage? Why no concern? 

Because taking out Stumbles McMyturn or Hoover’s Dad or Congresswoman Every Man’s Lesbian Fantasy Destroyer does not help the faction of the elite that benefited from #MeToo. 

That would help us, but not the elite. Throuple Gal was exposed by Townhall’s peppery sister site 

Redstate, not the mainstream media, and the mainstream media is horrified – not by her furniture 

defilement but that word of it got through the gate they yearn to keep.

The simple fact is that they desperately want Trump out so they can return to the good old days of winks,

nods, and payoffs.

Look at the Biden Family Crime Syndicate and the antics of the junior capo of the Cosa Nose Candy. 

In what universe is it A-OK that the crack-fueled Johnny Appleseed of paternity suits that is Joe’s 

snortunate son was cashing in on $50K a month in sweet, sweet Ukrainian gas gold just weeks after 

Ensign Biden got booted because he tooted? And then there’s riding on Air Force Two to the NBA’s favorite dictatorship for some commie ducats. Now there are even some Romanian shenanigans too – is there a single country on earth that Totally-Not-Senile Joe didn’t shakedown for the benefit

of his daughter-in-law’s second hubby? 

But our garbage elite’s garbage media seems amazingly uninterested in all this – it’s fascinated by 

the timing of a situation room snap after Trump unleashed the Army’s Delta Force on al-Baghdadi and by dog medal memes, but the Veep’s boy’s bag-mannery is not merely of no interest but is something they close their fussy phalanx ranks around to protect. Keep in mind, the premise underlying the whole star chamber impeachment festival of onanism is that Donald Trump, America’s chief law enforcement officer, was somehow wrong and bad and double-plus ungood because he allegedly asked the Ukrainians, “Hey, what’s the dealio with the Columbia Kid’s pay-offs?”

 In a non-bizarro political universe, the proper reaction to the Prezzy demanding, “You best fork over the evidence 

on these manifestly corrupt antics involving the Vice-President of the United States or we’re cutting you

 off from the American taxpayers’ feeding trough,” would be, “Hell to the yeah, four more years! 

Four more years!’

But it’s not, because the elite likes its sexual abuse and its foreign cash and its total lack of accountability to us, the Normals, the people who are supposed to be the ones that our elite is working for. The elite has not learned its lesson. It has not admitted that it sucks and resolved to stop sucking.

Instead, it has doubled down. And if it gets power again, it will act to solve what it sees as the most 

the urgent problem facing America – the fact that we the people have the ability to reject the elite’s utter incompetence and surpassing greed and elect someone with a mandate to burn down the whole rotten edifice.

If the elitists get power again, they are never letting go of it, not without a fight. And now, doesn’t the elite’s obsessive fixation on shutting down conservative dissent, eliminating competing institutions (like religious entities), and disarming law-abiding Americans make a lot more 

sense?

Our garbage elite is outraged over the success of my action-packed yet hilarious novels of America torn apart by liberal malice, People's Republic, Indian Country, and Wildfire. In a few weeks, Number IV, Collapse, will drop. 

They call these books “appalling.” They don’t want you to read them. That’s better than any blurb!

The use of Dialogue Tags and Descriptive Beats

In any good ‘how to write fiction’ book you’ll find at least one chapter if not two on the use and formatting of dialogue. Since dialogue can reveal a writer’s strengths or weaknesses, crafting good dialogue can be difficult. There are many pitfalls that writers can stumble into with dialogue.

There are skills you can develop to strengthen your dialogue. I would like to offer some insights into dialogue tags, descriptive beats in place of tags, and how to punctuate them. While these mechanics aren’t actually dialogue, they do draw attention to it and can influence how your readers will read a character’s dialogue and draw a reader into your story.

Definition.
Dialogue tag: A manner of speaking. Comes before or after dialogue.

Eg:
she said.
he shouted.

I find there are two common mistakes or misconception we all have with the use dialogue tags.

First: Being afraid to use said or asked.
Second: Believing said or asked becomes repetitive.

As a result, many writers have their characters constantly, stating, shouting, mumbling, murmuring, whispering, responding, commenting or commanding. When we feel the need to explain how a characters says something, then his or her dialogue isn’t strong enough. At the other end of the spectrum, if your dialogue is strong enough, then your tag only repeats to the reader what your character has just shown them.

There is a time and place for non said or asked dialogue tags. The excessive use of these tags is considered weak writing.

I've asked and heard the question asked, "Doesn’t the use of ‘said’ or ‘asked’ become repetitive and boring?"

The short answer is: No. As writers we are attuned to words. We pay attention to them. But if you’re doing you job right, the average reader is engrossed in the story and connected to the characters. A reader's eyes tends to pass over ‘said’ or ‘asked.’ If these tags stand out, it usually means your narrative isn’t being woven sufficiently into the dialogue.
Another mistake is over using the said or asked tags when there are only two characters in the scene. An occasional tag should be used in a long scene of dialogue to help the reader keep track of who is speaking. In scenes with more then two characters a combination of dialogue tags and descriptive beats will keep the story moving and the reader engrossed.
In his book ‘The Sixteenth Man" Thomas B. Sawyer’s entire manuscript is written without a single dialogue tag. Rather, Tom effectively uses descriptive beats for two person dialogue and for scenes with multiple character

Definition.
Descriptive beat: A sentence before, after, or breaking up dialogue that describes a character’s response or action.
Eg:
Janet finished brushing her hair. "I’m ready for my close up."

Len held out a steaming mug."Coffee, Mark?"
These examples are very basic. You can effectively eliminate all or most dialogue tags by weaving descriptive beats into your dialogue. However, any writer must be cautious about the use of descriptive beats. You need to pick quality descriptions, ones that reveal a character’s personality, motivation or adds to the setting and feel of the story. Having a characters make too many meaningful glances, or smiles, or nods will make your descriptions feel repetitive and unoriginal.

Another area easy to fix, that will strengthen your writing is punctuation.
Dialogue tag: "Hand me that book," he asked. (Comma inside the quotation marks)
Descriptive Beat: He pointed to the tome. "Hand me that book." (Period inside the quotations)
It’s as simple as paying attention to what you’re writing. Ask yourself this question. Is this a way of speaking? If yes, then punctuate with a comma. If no, use a period.
A final note, there are always gray areas. Groaned for example, is it a way of speaking or a noise made?
"Oh no," he groaned.
"Oh no." He groaned.
This is where you, the writer, has ultimate control of your story, by determining the best way to use the rules of the craft to tell your tale.

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Inmates Running the Asylum

California

LARGEST INSANE ASYLUM IN THE WORLD

Interesting that the LA Times did this. All the others are staying away from it.  Whether you are a Democrat or Republican, this should be of great interest to you!

Just One State - be sure and read the last part... try for 3 times.

If this doesn't open your eyes, nothing will!

From the LA. Times: 

1.    40% of all workers in LA County (10.2 million people) are working for cash; and not paying taxes. This is because they are predominantly illegal immigrants, working without a green card.   (Donald Trump was right)

2 95 %of 
warrants for murder in Los Angeles are for illegal aliens.

3.   75%  of people on the most wanted list in Los Angeles are illegal aliens.

4.  Over 2/3 of all births in Los Angeles County are to illegal alien Mexicans on Medi-Cal, whose births were totally paid for by taxpayers.

5.  Nearly 35% of all inmates in California detention centers are Mexican nationals; they are here illegally.

6.  Over 300,000 illegal aliens in Los Angeles County are living in garages.

7.  The FBI reports half of all gang members in Los Angeles are most likely illegal aliens from south of the border.

8.  Nearly 60% of all occupants of HUD properties are illegal

9.  21 radio stations in LA are Spanish-speaking.

10. In LA County,  5.1 million people   speak English; 3.9 million, speak Spanish. (There are 10.2 million people, in LA County.

(All 10 of the above facts were published in the Los Angeles Times) 

Less than 2%   of illegal aliens are picking our crops, but over 29% are on welfare.

Over 70% of the United States' annual population growth, ( and over 90%   of California, Florida, and New York), results from immigration.

Also, 29% of inmates in federal prisons are illegal aliens.

We are fools for letting this continue.

HOW CAN YOU HELP?

Send copies of this letter, to at least two other people. To 100, would be even better.

This is only one State... If this doesn't open your eyes  nothing 

will, and you wonder why Nancy Pelosi wants them to become voters! 

IF YOU DON'T AGREE, JUST DELETE -- IF YOU DO PASS IT ON!

WHERE DO WE GET THESE MORONS? 

Windfall Tax on Retirement Income   ... 

Adding a tax to your retirement is simply another way of saying to the American people "you're so darn stupid that we're going to keep doing this until we drain every cent from you."

 Nancy Pelosi  wants a Windfall Tax on Retirement Income.   In other words, tax what you have made by investing toward your retirement.  This woman is a nut case!   You aren't going to believe this.

Nancy Pelosi wants to put a Windfall Tax on all stock market profits (including Retirement fund, 401K and Mutual Funds)! 

Alas, it is true - all to help the 22 Million   (only 22 million?)   

Illegal Immigrants and other unemployed Minorities! 


This woman is frightening.   She quotes...   'We need to work toward the goal of equalizing income,  (didn't Marx say something like this?) in our country; and at the same time limiting the amount the rich can invest. (I'm not rich, are you?)

When asked how these new tax dollars would be spent, she replied:

We need to raise the standard of living of our poor, unemployed and minorities.  For example, we have an estimated 12 million illegal immigrants in our country who  need our help along with millions of unemployed minorities.

Stock market windfall profits taxes   could go a long way to guarantee these people the standard of living they would like to have as Americans.

(Read that quote again and again and let it sink in) 'Lower your retirement; give it to others who have not worked, as you have for your money.

This woman is out of her mind!!! --