By Cyriaque Lamar
On Twitter, Pixar storyboard artist Emma Coats has
compiled nuggets of narrative wisdom she's received working for the animation
studio over the years. It's some sage stuff, although there's nothing here
about defending yourself from your childhood toys when they inevitably come to
life with murder in their hearts. A truly glaring omission.
#1: You admire a character for trying more than for their
successes.
#2:
You gotta keep in mind what's interesting to you as an audience, not what's fun
to do as a writer. They can be very different.
#3:
Trying for theme is important, but you won't see what the story is actually
about til you're at the end of it. Now rewrite.
#4:
Once upon a time there was ___. Every day, ___. One day ___. Because of that,
___. Because of that, ___. Until finally ___.
#5:
Simplify. Focus. Combine characters. Hop over detours. You'll feel like you're
losing valuable stuff but it sets you free.
#6:
What is your character good at, comfortable with? Throw the polar opposite at
them. Challenge them. How do they deal?
#7:
Come up with your ending before you figure out your middle. Seriously. Endings
are hard, get yours working up front.
#8:
Finish your story, let go even if it's not perfect. In an ideal world you have
both, but move on. Do better next time.
#9:
When you're stuck, make a list of what WOULDN'T happen next. Lots of times the
material to get you unstuck will show up.
#10:
Pull apart the stories you like. What you like in them is a part of you; you've
got to recognize it before you can use it.
#11:
Putting it on paper lets you start fixing it. If it stays in your head, a
perfect idea, you'll never share it with anyone.
#12:
Discount the 1st thing that comes to mind. And the 2nd, 3rd, 4th, 5th – get the
obvious out of the way. Surprise yourself.
#13:
Give your characters opinions. Passive/malleable might seem likable to you as
you write, but it's poison to the audience.
#14:
Why must you tell THIS story? What's the belief burning within you that your
story feeds off of? That's the heart of it.
#15:
If you were your character, in this situation, how would you feel? Honesty
lends credibility to unbelievable situations.
#16:
What are the stakes? Give us reason to root for the character. What happens if
they don't succeed? Stack the odds against.
#17:
No work is ever wasted. If it's not working, let go and move on - it'll come
back around to be useful later.
#18:
You have to know yourself: the difference between doing your best &
fussing. Story is testing, not refining.
#19:
Coincidences to get characters into trouble are great; coincidences to get them
out of it are cheating.
#20:
Exercise: take the building blocks of a movie you dislike. How'd you rearrange
them into what you DO like?
#21:
You gotta identify with your situation/characters, can't just write ‘cool'.
What would make YOU act that way?
#22:
What's the essence of your story? Most economical telling of it? If you know
that, you can build out from there.
To give full creit were credit is due.
Note: This article first appeared on io9.com.
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